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No Better Time
JoelJosol

It was a matter of bad timing.
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Einstein asserted enough about spaces
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and for you it meant no vacancy.
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Death happens here regularly.
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In this vacuum, there is no room
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for the sound of your agony.
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In a purposeless universe,
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disappearances are just too far
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away from us,
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like nebulas signing off
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above our night sky beyond
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my span of attention
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as your dust is dispersed
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in this air, demonstrating Einstein,
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his physical laws.
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There is no better time for gravity
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to bring you back to me.
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12 Jul 09

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I know this may not matter to you but it matters to matter. In a vacuum there is no sound, though there may also be no listeners.
 — peoplescareT

    "With fame I become more and more stupid, which of course is a very common phenomenon"
   Albert Einstein, 1879-1955 RIP
   There is no better time for gravity to bring you back to me....
J.G. Smiles
 — goeszon

peoplescareT, thanks for the catch.
JG, thanks too.
 — JoelJosol

gneiss...

ease matter, is scent tit?
gneiss peace.

; )
 — fractalcore

:-) at FC.
 — JoelJosol

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