Justs ta "Rolling and Tumbling" Muddy Waters, she cried the whole night thru...
j.g. smiles — goeszon
This is amazing. I don't think L18 adds anything to the poem. L17 had me wondering and thinking about it and then 18 just gave away the ending. — frogilicus
Thanks Froggy, I added in |18 just to break the tension in a pseudo-humorous way. I'm thinking of ending it on |17 now... Maybe I'll just stick |18 in the footnote while I decide. Thanks for your critique you three! — unknown