| The Twain Brothers
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Redlander
| The Twain Brothers | 1 |
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Mark & Choochoo )) | 2 |
__((__ | 3 |
M M a rrrrr k k _______ \ / | 4 |
M mm M a a r r k k | | | |_____| |__ | 5 |
M m M aaaaa rrrrr k k | |_| \ | | 6 |
M M a a r r k k |______|___________\\ | 7 |
M M a a r r k k (@) (@) (@) (@)|\\\ | 8 |
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Twain | 9 |
And never shall they meet. | 10 |
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3 Aug 09 |
Rated 9.3 (8.6) by 17 users.
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unbelievable, you have a computer mind...Redlander
— goeszon
Great fun. A very cute inventive mix.
— unknown
This is so ridiculous, but I still can't help laughing, so, well done. :)
— Ananke
Guys! Thank you unknown, Goeszon, and Ananke you're all very kind.
— Redlander
Sensational!! Chuga chugga!
— Isabelle5
i gotta echo ananke. vewwy cwever. cwacked me up.
not wated...
— noodleman
Thanks Isabelle & noodleman I'm very appreciative
— Redlander
just the time and mistake factor makes this one of the best i have ever scene on p/c very orignal for a train with the brothers... this piece was truly to much...
— ambiguos
love it
— SkaaDee
Maybe when poets post poem art, it should have a clue in the title and be rated more as art and not a poem. I find these very cool and interesting but they aren't really poems.
— Isabelle5
WOW cool world art, it the same person who did the pipe?
— Liliana
very original and funny!
— frugal
Just noticed there is a family of art works, very refreshing, meet the steins, dogs and cats, the powerful pull of the choochoo, looks like a cup from starbucks though... very good all the three
j.g. smiles
— goeszon
I like your art poetry. Not pure poetry but very artistic indeed. Cool.
— Treadwell
I like shape art this is cool. A 10 in my opinion
— BxPR
creative=)
— unknown
Now this is a great concrete poem. And funny too. teehee :)
— JKWeb
!10
— ghost
I give you the fine art award of merit. Is this a vector image now?
— ghost
This is so cute. =)
— unknown
i agree with Isabelle5. its more art then poetry.
but i still find it absolutely cute. (:
— firerocket
Thanks firerocket for the nice comment!
— Redlander
ooohhh my, i could not stop laughting. your crazzy, and this is cute.:)
— unknown
It is amazingly cute; a sort of redux of a truly old sort of poetry where the formatting would make a flower or bird. Here we have what seems like a train, but the driver and the cargo: they lack (it so-says), any coupling device! "Twain" = two. The loco needs to go with its tender, or run out of steam fast! It's so compact and environmentally-conscious. IF no human is an island (old saw), then here, we learn, too that no human is useful if it only pulls away from it =fool supply= (sort of a bad pun!) Delightful in every way, this item.
— R_Reid_Welch
Thanks R_Reid_Welch! Long time no hear! What have you benn up to?
— Redlander
I guess some found it rather clever/cute. It is more gimmicky than anything else.
I am fond of both, yet not fond of this.
— OldShoe
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