|The Twain Brothers
The Twain Brothers
Mark & Choochoo ))
M M a rrrrr k k _______ \ /
M mm M a a r r k k | | | |_____| |__
M m M aaaaa rrrrr k k | |_| \ |
M M a a r r k k |______|___________\\
M M a a r r k k (@) (@) (@) (@)|\\\
And never shall they meet.
3 Aug 09
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unbelievable, you have a computer mind...Redlander
Great fun. A very cute inventive mix.
This is so ridiculous, but I still can't help laughing, so, well done. :)
Guys! Thank you unknown, Goeszon, and Ananke you're all very kind.
Sensational!! Chuga chugga!
i gotta echo ananke. vewwy cwever. cwacked me up.
Thanks Isabelle & noodleman I'm very appreciative
just the time and mistake factor makes this one of the best i have ever scene on p/c very orignal for a train with the brothers... this piece was truly to much...
Maybe when poets post poem art, it should have a clue in the title and be rated more as art and not a poem. I find these very cool and interesting but they aren't really poems.
WOW cool world art, it the same person who did the pipe?
very original and funny!
Just noticed there is a family of art works, very refreshing, meet the steins, dogs and cats, the powerful pull of the choochoo, looks like a cup from starbucks though... very good all the three
I like your art poetry. Not pure poetry but very artistic indeed. Cool.
I like shape art this is cool. A 10 in my opinion
Now this is a great concrete poem. And funny too. teehee :)
I give you the fine art award of merit. Is this a vector image now?
This is so cute. =)
i agree with Isabelle5. its more art then poetry.
but i still find it absolutely cute. (:
Thanks firerocket for the nice comment!
ooohhh my, i could not stop laughting. your crazzy, and this is cute.:)
It is amazingly cute; a sort of redux of a truly old sort of poetry where the formatting would make a flower or bird. Here we have what seems like a train, but the driver and the cargo: they lack (it so-says), any coupling device! "Twain" = two. The loco needs to go with its tender, or run out of steam fast! It's so compact and environmentally-conscious. IF no human is an island (old saw), then here, we learn, too that no human is useful if it only pulls away from it =fool supply= (sort of a bad pun!) Delightful in every way, this item.
Thanks R_Reid_Welch! Long time no hear! What have you benn up to?
I guess some found it rather clever/cute. It is more gimmicky than anything else.
I am fond of both, yet not fond of this.
haha, awesome :)
Thank you both naynay2012 and fractalcore