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catshrimpshitgrit VIII
DeformedLion

exhint this? xhibit me, from
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eve-ll, duvel the fun,
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no hop for one-legged luke
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sawed off-leg with light-"vwom
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vwom"- his father smoked
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too much and had to get a
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box,
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now he talks like a goldfish.
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speaking oggden i slash
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///
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the colours off the rainbow
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and beaker the waters of
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aramath into a glass tube
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of 500mills and bills
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of money don't know where
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to go go go.
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that is the cats draw though,
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water-colouring mice for the
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kill, shrimping off deesaster
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as the germans laugh the "ha ha",
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that's not cannes, its
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canonical as cannons ripping
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ACME into the keynesian nightmares
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of supplies in demands, where
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the fishwives go to lay
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their legs,
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hopping so hoppily that they grow
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back all nice and shiny.
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you can't get nothing
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worse than that, where
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martians and venuses
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all all-ine and cancer
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out the bad words like
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solder and heartier
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kind of metal-gun me , love
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me, hold, colder me as
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grit lodges its taxes in
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my i. mytie mare e me?
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no horses of courses
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just use me,
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like a sailor over the bow
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like a tailor over the tail,
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like a cat inside of a shop
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as it ponders the life
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of shrimp who are yummy
 45
in her tummy.
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14 Sep 09

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'light vwom-vwom' goes right inside my head and tickles. This is the best poem, and it really is written well. It's all so hip-hop but better.
 — 2queer2fear

yes, cheers.
 — DeformedLion

'like a cat in the shop' maybe?
otherwise, ah very gooed right, hand
off yores.

wow.
; )
 — fractalcore

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