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crash coarse
fractalcore

well
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aye aum naught
 2
 
 
aye dare naught
 3
say
 4
 
 
butt if ewe deed
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say ewe wooed
 6
 
 
bee hear, buy
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my sighed
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l o n g e r
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end ah bit more
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eyed bee more
 11
 
 
then happy.
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written may 2, 2009
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a sequel to "noose die've"



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20 Sep 09

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goeszon,
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very sweet of you guys.

thank you [forever].
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fractal, my friend, this is good.
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welcome back, raveneffect.

howyabeen?
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sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetness yes

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