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for anake because you asked so vair nicely :)

Moonfeathers fall
wait, no
they fly
to me with smiles
swirling my hair
tickling my ear
they whisper rhymes
of mine
I smile now
and giggle to think
the moon could know me
so well
moonfeathers fall
wait, no
they find me
with purpose in each design
They flock to me
these feathers shy and
dripping with lunar skies
they're falling
wait, no
they fly

21 Sep 09

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    Beauty is a manifestation of secret natural laws, which otherwise would have been hidden from us forever.  Johann Wolfgang von Goethe.... I believe he wrote that for this day, never may it be that you should hide your self from us... Poet
j.g. smiles
 — goeszon

nice poem-
my only small suggestion(s) would be to put a comma between 'wait no' on lines 2, 15 and 24...I feel those lines begging for a pause..
also, you may want to put a space between 'feathers' and 'shy' in line 19..
otherwise, me likes
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It's lovely.
 — Ananke