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Assignment (2 of --)
Aziel

i hang on your body
 1
wreaths
 2
of expectation
 3
 
 
like with splintered, peeling doors
 4
i worry
 5
how protected am I?
 6

6 Oct 09

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    Almost all of our sorrows spring out of our relations with other people.   Arthur Schopenhauer

j.g. smiles
 — goeszon

how protected are you?

i would change 'wreaths' to 'crucifix'.
 — raskolniikov

but i don't adknowledge the existence or non-existence of a god/gods, and therefore, ergo, by proxy, i should not never use dreaded "c" word in conjunction with mine.  or something to that effect.
 — Aziel

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