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be-nine lives
fractalcore

cat, the bull,
 1
shit-
 2
[ted]
 3
inn duh pull.
 4
 
 
he kneads help --
 5
ted, the mouse --
 6
two bee[,] lift-ted
 7
out, off duh what-her
 8
 
 
end get inn duh how's
 9
too help the bull, cat,
 10
kill himself width ah
 11
cheese greater.
 12



a kitty-ditty tribute
[of sorts] to life --
what else?

no kitty
was harmed
in the making
of this thing.

: )

16 Oct 09

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weird

this is making me see weird shit dude.

must be the peanut butter magic brownies i just downed. st. exooberee
meets jackeline dupree

(you'd have to replace cheese greater with mandolin though a la bobby fischer)

funes fined for flyin canabbles
 — unknown

i've herd a-bout hashed brown-knees
end duh lei-ill prunes, funes.

nut sew shoo-her a-bout jackal-lean
nor fish-her.

duh cheese greater ease the greatest
cheese, sew eat stays.

tanks fore dropping
bye.

: )
 — fractalcore

so(e),
da' bull 'tis a bull name(d) cat?
'tis interesting--
some fin floatin' in da' pool...

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     :)

a-MUSE-ing

  
 — JKWeb

well, eats either duh
plain ted ore duh
brown ted inn duh
pull float-thing

butt eat shooed bee duh
won grate inn aft uh
bee A-bull two help
cat, the bull, shit, er
kill, him-self width uh
cheese greater.

did you know that that
chinese character means
'sky' or 'heaven' or 'gawd'?

boo-duh bless ewe, JKWeb.

eye
       aum
            ;    ewe
       aum
eye          we e



...AUM...
  kwats!


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fractalcore
     : )
 — fractalcore

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