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coo ill: i might change
fractalcore

don-cha jest
 1
fee'll two hut
 2
ore too coaled?
 3
 
 
kwats two do?
 4
wear two go?
 5
 
 
hell[?]
 6
 
 
eye.
 7
daunt?
 8
kNOw.
 9



or something like that.
: )

16 Oct 09

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cool poem, I like it.
ore too coaled

eye.
daunt?
kNOw.

Nice.:)

~~
I actually very much like extreme temperatures.
 — nisetru

thanks ewe sew match,
knee-set-rue.

eye kin stand thee extremes
opt two sum point end cant
prolly stand inn duh snow nor
inn duh fire fore ever.

yore all-ways very kind.
: )
 — fractalcore

end duh pee-pool hear
halve mist ewe sew match.

; )
 — fractalcore

your play on words is always classic. seriously, sometimes i read your poems just to see your word manipulations embedded in something sly and enjoyable.

this is the way i've really felt lately, torn between the two. it gets old after awhile.

oh well. glad you're still writing poetry. you had a recession there for a little, but i'm glad you still post.

but anyway that was forever ago. so not sure why i'm mentioning it.
 — listen

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