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piece in poverty[?]
fractalcore

biped, little thumbs
 1
pant[s] through, the wrong way around,
 2
sordid in the slums.
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written 10/20/09
@ http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/3184/

thanks, unk.



this also is in memory of jenakajoffer's
mishap that she mentioned here:
http://www.poetrycritical.net/forum/read/205806/

hope everything's fine now, jen.
take care always.



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fractalcore
      : )

8 Nov 09

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Interesting! I really liked this one. The rhyme was pleasant.
 — ishtarboy300

thanks so much, ishtarboy300.

: )
 — fractalcore

aw fract,
you've got it in few words.  and i love the title.

you're so nice, thanks for the cool write.
=-)
 — jenakajoffer

thanks, guys.

sorry for the late reply.
hope everything's fine with both of you.

; )
 — fractalcore

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