i use to eat
5 Dec 09
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Do people not believe you when you throw this on the table and tell that it is a poem? Is that the reason for the title? I happen to like this poem very much. It reminds me of the poetry of Richard Brautigan; simple, sincere, and has a childlike innocence. I can also relate to this because I'm quite poor and can't afford good food. But at the local food liquidation center I found these precooked bags of rice for 15 cents. It was the happiest day of my life.
yes, it's a poem.
it'd be fun to see you do variations on this -- like, do 15 variations on the wording and topic and see what you found.
i you'z to eat poorly
mice, cheez and barley,
then i discovered
gize, rarlic and bees.
i confur- this is pretty neat. variations is definitely a good idea.
the title isn't really appropriate. it's almost too brazen for the simplicity of the poem itself.
* "variations are"
naw, you had it -- it would be short for 'a set of variations', a single thing...
right on, bauer.
hey,fuck you you fucks
this is my found poem
you fuck fuckkkskkssk
oh gingie. =-)
we share our diets^_^ most certainly a poem, and one worth reading.
i changed the title tonight, it read yes,it's a poem, i really hated it, so it's called fact.
.. lol, cute.. 10
-- Leaf Rainbow
i liked 'poo' better.
you know, this almost sounds like
green peæs [G's piece] in many
fRact here, btw.
hey,how do you do that with your letters?
i just made good use of the internet once
[google, hehe] when i needed some special
character for this:
[i sorta remember reading 'my bob marley
book report' when i wrote it; know that piece?]
you can actually copy-paste that special
character from my comment if you wanna