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schizo-boo duh'eye'mansions
fractalcore

t'eye a yell-owe rib-bin
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'round thee old owe-ick
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three mmm'aisles thick
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wear boo-duh sat flat
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on satori and spat
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ether-nah-tea tricks...
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Om, eye, gut too eat!
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two: duh core of eat!
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the star is hungry, eat
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it's own-lei mee.
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Thank You, self.
 11
eat whell...
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aye miss mmm'eye nisetru so much
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written 12/25/2009
http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/211203/5/



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thanks for faving, my love.
did you hear the 2 voices in this?

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