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JKWeb

I ecno etorw tuo a etuor
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erehw eht srettel erew sdrawkcab
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it took many directions >>>>>d
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                                               o
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                                                  w
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                                                     n
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                                                         r i g h t >>>>>>>  c              c
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                                                                                           r      r
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                                                                                               i
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                                                                                            s     s
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                                                                                        s             s
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                                                                                          c          c
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                                                                                             r     r
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                                                                                                o
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                                                                                             s     s
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                                                                                         s             s
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                                                                                                d
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                                                                                                o
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                                                                                                w
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                                                                                                 n
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                                                                                                    town lost
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                                                                                                              in a maze
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                                                                                                              of signs
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                                                                                                              do the math
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                                                                                                              find a path
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                                                                                                              compass, GPS
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                                                                                                              stressed
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                                                                                                              I digress
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                                                                                                              choreographed
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                                                                                                              maps
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                                                                                                              follow your nose-
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                                                                                                              It
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                                                                                                                knows
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                                                                                                                            the
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                                                                                                                                   road
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                                                                                                                                            HOME
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                                                                                                                     ______
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                                                                                                                   /\______l
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                                                                                                                  |_|______l
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29 Dec 09

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standing ovation!
 — mandolyn

mandolyn-
thanks much...
I think you had commented
before I finished tweaking!
gratitude
 — JKWeb

Cerulise-
thanks
for making this a fave
 — JKWeb

Ah, at last, a new picture poem by the resident master!
 — Isabelle5

sad.  *blink*  (8)

--  Quiet ToadKDW
 — unknown

busting balls, irking eggs, word spit and then carmen figuratums inside out withoutta doubt -- nicely played
 — AlchemiA

Haha! This is quite creative Jk--nice work.
 — PaulS

Isabelle-
thank you
for having a l@@k
and nice comment
 — JKWeb

Quiet Toad-
thank you too--
*appreciated*
 — JKWeb

AlchemiA-
thanks...
for reading and intriguing comment--

Namaste
 — JKWeb

PaulS-
thank you...
glad you like it
 — JKWeb

very very c
            ;     o
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            ;         l
            ;          &nbs p;  !
 — jpmhawk

jpmhawk-
thank you
very very much :J
 — JKWeb

cool. nice. thank you.
 — unknown

unknown-
thanks for reading
 — JKWeb

nice graphics, is it interactive?
 — syrossoul

whoah!

keep it up, JKWebster sir.
: )
 — fractalcore

syrosSOUL-
thanks...
I tried to make it interactive
but I'm still living primitively :J
 — JKWeb

fractalcore-
I was hoping you'd have a look at this...
thanks a bunch
 — JKWeb

very clever, jkweb weaver. this is a dizzy ditty with a good message.
 — SarahMichele

SarahMichele-
thanks for reading
and cool comment
:J
 — JKWeb

Wonderful concept. This winding road is  so cleverly driven as an internal as well as an external component of this poem. Not many people can pull this off. I was slightly thrown off by the first few lines...Oh, are they written backwards? Hmmm, way to make the reader work. You seem to really, from what I've gathered from your other poems, explore the page, as if it too were a road. Though the generosity of your pen  seldom leaves us without a map. Nice write my friend.
 — NadCloutier

NadCloutier-
Thanks for reading and nice words...
I really appreciate the positive feedback
 — JKWeb

What a trip XD

Very nice write.
 — laura352

laura352-
thanks for checking this out
and for favoring..
gratitude
 — JKWeb

Cute.
 — aurelius

aurelius-
thanks for reading
and brief positive feedback..
 — JKWeb

!eno siht no boj eciN
 — Tandisol

Tandisol-
sknaht, eye etaicerppa ti.
 — JKWeb

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 — unknown

I found hair in the spam from Japan.
 — JKWeb

Cool little write :D
 — psychofemale

Thanks for having a look psychofemale!
 — JKWeb

yes, loverly.
 — unknown

Thank you unknown one.  I'm glad you seem to like it.
 — JKWeb

Cute.
 — duffyj83

glad you think so duffyj83.  thanks.
 — JKWeb

Love the crisscross part.  Clever picture-poem JK.
 — sybarite

thanks for diggin the concrete effort sybarite.
 — JKWeb

OH very wonderful to say the very least.

could you possibly adjust the angle on the top right roof beam? It's a little off and it's bothering me.

sort of like a wedgy

other than that

wonderful

CC
 — unknown

thanks kindly
Clara Cohen?
repairs on the house could prove costly.
glad you like it otherwise.
 — JKWeb

*carmela* cohen. not sure who you refer to.
liked your poem

thank you for the opportunity to read

Carmela Cohen
 — unknown

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 — JKWeb

gotchya' CC.

thanks for re-looking.
 — JKWeb

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