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erehw eht srettel erew sdrawkcab
it took many directions >>>>>d
                                                         r i g h t >>>>>>>  c              c
                                                                                           r      r
                                                                                            s     s
                                                                                        s             s
                                                                                          c          c
                                                                                             r     r
                                                                                             s     s
                                                                                         s             s
                                                                                                    town lost
                                                                                                              in a maze
                                                                                                              of signs
                                                                                                              do the math
                                                                                                              find a path
                                                                                                              compass, GPS
                                                                                                              I digress
                                                                                                              follow your nose-

29 Dec 09

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standing ovation!
 — mandolyn

thanks much...
I think you had commented
before I finished tweaking!
 — JKWeb

for making this a fave
 — JKWeb

Ah, at last, a new picture poem by the resident master!
 — Isabelle5

sad.  *blink*  (8)

--  Quiet ToadKDW
 — unknown

busting balls, irking eggs, word spit and then carmen figuratums inside out withoutta doubt -- nicely played
 — AlchemiA

Haha! This is quite creative Jk--nice work.
 — PaulS

thank you
for having a l@@k
and nice comment
 — JKWeb

Quiet Toad-
thank you too--
 — JKWeb

for reading and intriguing comment--

 — JKWeb

thank you...
glad you like it
 — JKWeb

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 — jpmhawk

thank you
very very much :J
 — JKWeb

cool. nice. thank you.
 — unknown

thanks for reading
 — JKWeb

nice graphics, is it interactive?
 — syrossoul


keep it up, JKWebster sir.
: )
 — fractalcore

I tried to make it interactive
but I'm still living primitively :J
 — JKWeb

I was hoping you'd have a look at this...
thanks a bunch
 — JKWeb

very clever, jkweb weaver. this is a dizzy ditty with a good message.
 — SarahMichele

thanks for reading
and cool comment
 — JKWeb

Wonderful concept. This winding road is  so cleverly driven as an internal as well as an external component of this poem. Not many people can pull this off. I was slightly thrown off by the first few lines...Oh, are they written backwards? Hmmm, way to make the reader work. You seem to really, from what I've gathered from your other poems, explore the page, as if it too were a road. Though the generosity of your pen  seldom leaves us without a map. Nice write my friend.
 — NadCloutier

Thanks for reading and nice words...
I really appreciate the positive feedback
 — JKWeb

What a trip XD

Very nice write.
 — laura352

thanks for checking this out
and for favoring..
 — JKWeb

 — aurelius

thanks for reading
and brief positive feedback..
 — JKWeb

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sknaht, eye etaicerppa ti.
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I found hair in the spam from Japan.
 — JKWeb

Cool little write :D
 — psychofemale

Thanks for having a look psychofemale!
 — JKWeb

yes, loverly.
 — unknown

Thank you unknown one.  I'm glad you seem to like it.
 — JKWeb

 — duffyj83

glad you think so duffyj83.  thanks.
 — JKWeb

Love the crisscross part.  Clever picture-poem JK.
 — sybarite

thanks for diggin the concrete effort sybarite.
 — JKWeb

OH very wonderful to say the very least.

could you possibly adjust the angle on the top right roof beam? It's a little off and it's bothering me.

sort of like a wedgy

other than that


 — unknown

thanks kindly
Clara Cohen?
repairs on the house could prove costly.
glad you like it otherwise.
 — JKWeb

*carmela* cohen. not sure who you refer to.
liked your poem

thank you for the opportunity to read

Carmela Cohen
 — unknown

spam insurance...hmm
 — JKWeb

gotchya' CC.

thanks for re-looking.
 — JKWeb

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