poetry critical

online poetry workshop



We Could Be Married
UHamilton

We Could Be Married
 1
 
 
By Uriah Lee Hamilton
 2
 
 
Catching every flower-petal dream
 3
That falls on summer lawns,
 4
I find my childhood still alive
 5
In the park-like innocence
 6
Of all my thoughts.
 7
 
 
Meet me at dawn
 8
In the apple orchard
 9
Beneath the blue sky.
 10
 
 
Destiny has designed
 11
Our mutual happiness.
 12

1 Jan 10

Rated 10 (10) by 1 users.
Active (1):
Inactive (1): 10, 10

(define the words in this poem)
(81 more poems by this author)

(1 user considers this poem a favorite)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

a nice sweet poem which feels like it was written true. no artificial sweeteners, and with real butter. that's good in a poem!!
 — bmikebauer

yes.

: )
 — fractalcore

good poem
 — unknown

No hydrogented oil! PURE delight! (in agreement to what bauer said)
 — mandolyn

mandolyn is dumb
 — unknown

love this
 — psychofemale

dumb? c'mon you can do better than that. A geek wad would of been better.
 — mandolyn

0.363s