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Om paw-leece | free dog
fractalcore

...'Free
 1
God' --
 2
Help
 3
Incited...
 4
Jested?
 5
Kept
 6
Low?
 7
Man,
 8
No!
 9
Oh,
 10
Please...
 11




to be read in a loop like a mantra


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written 12/18/2009
http://poetrycritical.net/read/60188/

thanks, unk.



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to all,

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fractalcore
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