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maybeægle monoDIAlogue
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i’ll make us our own igloo in your yard
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for the entire duration of winter
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would you like that?
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we’ll exchange eskimo kisses
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polar bear hugs
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you’ll show me the whole of oradea on a sled, just you and i
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we’ll be pulled by a dozen beagles
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maybee 2 dozens... if you’ve gained so much weight when we meet
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at certain stops we’ll hug and roll in the snow
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throw snowballs at each other
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maybee you’ll teach me how to skate at some wide sea of ice at a faraway place
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...
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on top of the 1 or 2 dozens, there’ll be a pack leader called maybeægle, so there’ll be 13 or 25 of them all
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...
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surely, maybeægle’s nose will be
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heart-shaped red
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...
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P.S.
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chocky looks so healthy and fat
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http://i50.tinypic.com/2jbjn7.jpg
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he can lead the pack if he wants
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written 1/5/10

for my bestest friend and soulmate, nisetru,
with all the love in the Universe —{@

i miss yo so much.
i'm more in love with you each day.


Eternity be fulfilled,

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8 Jan 10

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lovely
 — nisetru

yes, you are.

and i changed the title
a little bit.

---{@


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 — fractalcore

made me grin with the sweetness there-in your poem 'bout 'shnookums' or rubbing noses together and laughing in an igloo, u 'n nisetru and maybeægle’s nose too :)
 — AlchemiA

how cute. very tres jolie. enjoyed.
gypsy pigs are wonderful. thanks.
 — unknown

thanks, Alc and unk.
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 — fractalcore

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