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Mindanao, January
gnormal

Perfect sleeping weather.
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No blankets. No AC.
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If only dogs 
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and roosters could agree.
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25 Jan 10

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i enjoyed the humour of it.
 — billy423uk

But what if you have to pee?
 — mandolyn

It is much worse in Manila. If jeepney and tricycles would finaly reach the finish line.
 — JadeOcampo

january sounds nice where you are.
but i hate dogs AND roosters, so i'd rather suffer nosebleeds from my electric
heater in my cold room with the ice on the inside of the windows,
failing to ward off the bitter winter of a slightly northern canadian village.

cute poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Took me a minute. Sparse, well-measured, and amusing.
 — NicMichaels

Thanks! That's one of my favorite comments ever.
 — gnormal

Made me smile
 — frugal

wala bang naka post na poem ng mindanao
 — unknown

mean-done-now.
: )
 — fractalcore

what is Mindanao? a place in china?
 — Sequiturist

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