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the robin
unknown

His red breast;
 1
broke with the surrounding white.
 2
his path
 3
like petals in the snow
 4
darting here,
 5
darting there,
 6
quickly,
 7
without a trace.
 8
 
 
next to him,
 9
who's breast
 10
of similar hue
 11
stained the whiteness
 12
leaving an indelible
 13
mark
 14

4 Feb 10


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This is nice.
:)
 — mandolyn

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