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When You Think About me

Have you ever had one of those
A rare occurrence of anger
You feel like your veins are smoking pipes
know your emotions could physically
burn some one, but you
"Maybe I'll burn this page instead"
You sit down awkwardly to write
Us, but the ink is dry and the pen is
bent and nothing. comes. out.
The page is crumpled, burnt, and bare
Just like

4 Feb 10

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I like it.  Took me a sec. to see how your title correlated with the poem.  Nice structure too.  Enjoyed reading. *occurence
 — JKWeb

 — JKWeb

i very much lyk it. the structure is great.
 — firerocket

This is very good!
 — mandolyn