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poke
fractalcore

'em'n oh puke --
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ewe ore ass-toot.
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_________
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partly for sir_I _clan, hank,
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onklcrispy, outerspace, chuckle_s,
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CervusWright, Odin, Mor, poetbill...
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and pls IgnorEmal the ff
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verssssifier's piece:
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ewe arse sew
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gayly sued in
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sudan back in
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the days of
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the broke[n]
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rear-view
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meow-roar
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* Meryl Richards: The early bird might get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese.


* Steven Gray: cheezus freakin cripes -- i got 3 different mice plugged into my machine, but they ain't got no cheese-story to tell, hehe.

perhaps i shooed salmon the cats to their sardine meals so my wormly mice cooed fly like birds in the virtual cheeze world?

kill the rabbit, kill the rabbit!!!
and let the skunks get skanky!!!


* Meryl Richards: hahahaha!


* Steven Gray: too much laughter is a sign of cheese overdose.


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15 Feb 10

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I think you have a screw loose
somewhere
I like you
you are fun.
 — sir_I_clan

skanky
you are funny,
you are
English
 — unknown

yeah, kill the thread-starter

hear:
http://poetr ycritical.net/forum/read/216098/

oops, jazzed kiddin...
end par-don my English.

; )
 — fractalcore

weriododod
 — sir_I_clan

ha ha, just kidding
have an 8
i like you
late.
 — sir_I_clan

they
hate
late

: )
 — fractalcore

i don't:
aye daunt.

: )
 — fractalcore

butt daunt-[h]8 mee.
fleece hate mee instead.

: )
 — fractalcore

boompfh

: )
 — fractalcore

:P
 — fractalcore

a poem, 4 me, wow
 — Odin

To Jackson MacLow & beyond! This is fresh, inventive & fun. I do like your paraprodian quotes!--especially the Elmer Fud one.
 — Seditswing

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