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able miser on bee-wings

bees have idiotic
metaphorical lies...
symptomatic stings:
inflammatory bytes,
red on paper
white --
vulcan ears,
mountain nears
on hyperflight...
some have ID droned,
some have IT cloned;
the stone-heart
on subverted wings,
sing your heart away,
trot on an A-string.

aka 'miserable being AKA beed-youth'

written 2/21/10

for Diana Jiganie, my nisetru

and all the beed-youths
staying true to their maybees

     /   \
      : )

23 Feb 10

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come out,
come out,
my fellow

; )
 — fractalcore

knock knock
tis i
a bored yore sheep
lettuce sell~
 — mandolyn

tease aye
poke eye

a bored rubber
boat about too
flowt anyhow

; )
 — fractalcore

Dis po'em, tis gr-ape.
 — mandolyn

aren't grapes the collar off love-ender?
diss shooed make ewe sic.

; )
 — fractalcore

ewe cot me.
 — mandolyn

butt ewe kin cut me back
width a rubber knife from
a quack, quack, quack.

; )
 — fractalcore

cut back frack o wack?
like ee ol poe-tate-o sack?
 — mandolyn

poet ate, oh, on a rubber plate.
goal den gait on a sour bait?

; )
 — fractalcore

poate smacked on thee wackee back
choked em gud but oot came da scrap
 — mandolyn

enchilada dee doo dah day
 — mandolyn

enchilada chili n' chilled
wood uh gluten him keeled.

leave him width leaves
of tea, he hood owen't party
inn duh grass off tahiti, er haiti.

; )
 — fractalcore

so, what say you?

: )
 — fractalcore

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 — JKWeb


You're so talented.

 — laura352

Whoa Web!
I wish I could type in a different language...
I'd say "Go find me a fish. Now"
 — mandolyn

†ђąŊКȘ, JКWΣb.

: )
 — fractalcore


i'm surrounded by
really great contagious
people here, that's all.

thanks for

: )
 — fractalcore

rubber mandolyn,

go ride your rubber boat
and fetch yourself a
rubber ducky.

; )
 — fractalcore

Can I ride a rubber boat in Hebrew?
 — mandolyn

...and so rubb'rew mandolyn
floats a rubber boat on the
waters of palestine...

if she rides it is no business
of mine.
: )
 — fractalcore