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=fractalcore= by prof. silliread
R_Reid_Welch

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Book One
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fractalcore is not a bot,
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or so we heard );
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we hear a lot
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that fractalcore is not a bot.
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we heard, we hear, we think
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a snot
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may have planted
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'wry suspicions
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that won't grow
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in Dear Perdition's
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garden spot of fractured
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t'aints:
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fractalcore is not a bot.
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oh, he's male and is so hot:
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all the boys and girls go sizzle
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when he toots 'is coloured whizzle:
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"i am fractalcore (; i'm not
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a bar of soap or aqua bot-
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tle: give y'earned all
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—blithe o' me 'art.
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n'oww,
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that's cheap rhyme—
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—'arf o' th' part.
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h'ere?  me 'air?
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it's thick and dense !
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like me brain: all so h'immense !
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i am fractalcore (; i am
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not a bot. a man i can
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be, or I can play-to
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tilt all s'words in an
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-y s'way.
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i am fractalcore
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at core.
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i have spoke—'n.squeal no more?
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good life now,
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now, for you all,
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waxed blue well
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with crayons tall."
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Book Too
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fractal's tale is now an item
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in some bathtub's rimey 'ottom.
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r. did soak in soapy wa-wa;
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n. pooted there while sing-
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ing "la-la..."
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—fractle core is not a bot:
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nice butt, but, not hurtful-hot.
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oh, sad fact: 'is battery
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shorts and shocks in bath O C:
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thee: any mix of salt-read-ee—
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oh, sad fact: 'is battery
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shorts and sox in bath-y tubs;
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see: any mix of watered pee
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be bad for fractalcores in me.
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http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/217780/5/
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http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/220619/
http://poetrycritical.net/forum/read/225631/4/
(more Cockney "me" and "'n', just retouches...)

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so, yes, reid needs a hot bot, er butt, er bath?

again, my dear reid, there's only brine in my
hydrocephalus,

but thank you for this piece.
it came as a surprise, er rather, i was surprised
and awestruck at the very least.

i still Om

and sometimes, i feel like a bot needing a
hot bot, butt, bath et cetera et al and all, hehe.

; )
 — fractalcore

I totally bot this.
A bot you're not
nor a sundae topped with snot
But frac o wack
who leads the pack
to word play on PC!

:-D
 — mandolyn

Err I mean:
Frac o wack
who leads the pack
of word play with Po-ats!

yeah. that.
 — mandolyn

poo@sss.sss

; )
 — fractalcore

poo@poopoo.poo
 — mandolyn

ye@hahah.aha

: )
 — fractalcore

hmm, ye@hahagrrrr.eat

; )
 — fractalcore

hmm,
again:

ye@hahagrrrr.eat

: )
 — fractalcore

once more:

ye@hahagrr.eat

: )
 — fractalcore

It is vastly changed since your first appliances. Hold your crock pots for a mo' per'aps?
HERE is the item as it stands on day one.  No bolds or 'scores are possible in this bar
of Ivory, not in this commenary spot: donny ran out with the html tool.

ARCHIVE, for future deferences:

Book One

fractalcore is not a bot,
or so we heard ); we hear a lot
that fractalcore is not a bot.

we heard, we hear, we think
a snot

may have planted

s'picions that won't grow

this side Perdition's

garden spot of fractured
t'aints: fractalcore is not a bot.

oh, he is male and is so hot:
all the boys and girls go sizzle

when he toots 'is coloured whizzle:

"i am fractalcore, i'm not
a bar of soap or aqua bot.
i give my life to art and heart.

now, that's cheap rhyme...

...'alf the part.

'ere, of me 'air?
it's thick and dense!

like my brain: all so immense!
i am fractalcore, i am
not a bot. a man i can

be, or I can play....

tilt all s/words in any way.
i am fractalcore

at core.

i have spoke; so wheel no more.

good life now, now, for you all,
waxed blue well with crayons tall."


Book Too

fractal's tale is now an item
in some bathtub's briny bottom.

reid took a bath in soapy wa-wa;
pooted there while singin 'la-la-
laaa...'   fractlecore is not a bot:
yes,  nice,  butt,not hurtful hot.

oh, sad fact: its battery
shorts and shocks in bathOS-
thee: any mix of salt read-ee.

oh, sad fact: its battery
shorts and sox in bathos,
see: any mix of watered pee
be bad for fractalcores and me.
++++++++++++++++it will change over time as i see new ways to deface

fractalcore, who is


not a bot,
 — R_Reid_Welch

whoa!

this is kinda bold, non-bot sir.

; )
 — fractalcore

let's close it before some real unkbot
turns this into some hype again, shall we?


there.

: )
 — fractalcore

I have no options!
I HAVE NO DANG OPTIONS!
I cannot speak bold. I cannot speak italic. I cannot speak Aviant!

darnitall@stupidkeyboard.stickit
 — mandolyn

Very fun. The countless plays on words were just delightful.
 — ishtarboy300

Little retouches of "cockney" voice and some emdashes replace the former "..." marks.
Some tiny rewordings and not much h'else, for to over-vize would not be wise;
for after all, am not a bot and never 'gin shall run so hot.
 — R_Reid_Welch

Instant revision: am sleepy, have not slept for more than a day now, but will just shut of the monitor (my sole source of light, nearly) and go to sleep AFTER I now THANK my helpers, numerous, above. ALL inputs, even if they were "pans" help me to see an item, whether it is purely good, or, just too "person-type specific" to be self-supporting.

I think now, that perhaps, fractal's ode will be "self suporting": in that is makes people think and chuckle for TWO people. For I am of him, in a sense.  And he makes me laugh when I am sad.  We both win this way.  I love to "ode" people, all of you here, all I OWE attention to, for your generous helps.  Thank you all so much...am an ingrate named
 — R_Reid_Welch

Anoter PS, all at about three thirty AM on the fourth of March, as time gallumps along across 2010, heedless of it carnage.

Want to say, THANK YOU FRACTALCORE for closing the bold tag up above I will never make such a a terror-error again. Thanks!  Remember folks: do not drop soap in communal shower stalls, and always remember to close html anal tags. OK,
 — R_Reid_Welch

The  item, which I hesitate to call a "poem"
only because it bumps and grinds along like a homersexual lap dancer
in the unwilling face of a straight, fractiontionated human, Our Fractacore,\

well, p.r. here keeps retouching the item, making it worse in ways.  P.R. does not right
poohtry, not much: he/it per-ferrs to upslust h'apple cart-art ist types.  Improvements already in place, day by day, always wit the improverments. True, most improverments are on the order of quality-work of a Hoover with a totally filled-up dirt-sucker bag, but hey, I am a pooret.   And here we are.  I will suck you poems too, of all lint, cat hair, etc.  Just ask. I do suck. Just install a fresh dirtbag in my Hoovereid slef (nottatypo, only a seamen's sucker running on mains power);
 — R_Reid_Welch

Homosexual lap dancer----What, Do they exist?
is fact gay?



lol.
he he he
 — unknown

31/3/2010:
the whimsy is now about a month old
and has just been retouched in about
two dozen, small ways.  it is not "gay",
but only smiles for those who have lim-
it less guiles.

kind thanks to all who make others feel bette.r,
even if they always lose money at the horse races.

t.y,
 — R_Reid_Welch

This comment was made just a few minutes after the last comment, by slef (nottatypo)...by SERF, again (thatsmorelikeit);

OK. The item has seen two dozen minor revisions in the past half hour.
It will, in time, be further, slightly, improved: as to justification of the "cockneyisms", and, also, to their deliberate inconsistency, for the dialect,
by nature, is supposed to be unpredictable, what with added, or dropped, "H" letters and contraction marks that indicate missing letters....et cetera?
(fake Latin, meaning "eat me?)

Prof. Silliread, aka:
 — R_Reid_Welch

i never can thank you enough for this, reid.
hope you are well.

take care always.


love,

     ____
    __/__
      /\
    /    \
fractalcore
     : )
 — fractalcore

Reid here.  I can't access my account and make repairs to this item. There's a quote mark-spot that needs "justification" with an earlier line.  I can't fix that at this time (Donald, please fix my lost password?)

FINISH, revised, put in italic for only here in this commentary, not in the item itself.  It is merely a line spacing:


shorts and sox in bath-y tubs;
see: any mix of watered pee


be bad for fractalcores in me.

------rw 10/25/10
 — unknown

Reid here, same date, thanking fractalcore for being so good and careful and caring a person.


rw
 — unknown

You are always great fun to read, Reid ;)
 — jharrison

rw again on 10/25.  
Thank you so much, Jennifer, you tattooed exemplar of love and logic.  

Thanks to mandolyn, also, for being a good chick, marinated in buttermilk on most days. Thanks for laughing at this cooked gosling, rw.
 — unknown

quantoom boompfh...

whellcalm buck, read.

; )
 — fractalcore

wowowow...dears,did i miss fun on this? who is Fractalcore?
 — unknown

you are surely not boring Reid, you have a great sense of humor, keep on keep on writing and i want to see more of yours, love, hulda
 — Hulda

happy holidays, reid.
take care always.

http://ak.jacquielawson.com/product/cardswf/3175360.swf? cont&

; )
 — fractalcore

Reid, i am too late for a piece like this.

??????????????????????????????????

what fact for fract?
 — unknown

person could potentially be a good writer, but... this ain't it. Even as a joke.
 — aliar

sux reading this shit, never have any appreciation for this banality. FFS!
 — Thenameless

ey, reid!

how have you been, dude?
hope you're doing well.
come back to pc soon, ok?

take care.

: )
 — fractalcore

very cute
 — unknown

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