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The sound of one hand clapping
ahed_gehog

AAARRRGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
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21 Mar 10

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humm, i think the other hand must be happily connected with some other part of your body. is that why that sound? use vaseline.
 — bmikebauer

Must be the spring non-sequinox.
 — NicMichaels

AAARRRGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
 — unknown

clap... clap.... clap
 — bmikebauer

there's an (cl)ap for that....
 — unknown

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: )
 — fractalcore

lol -- what is the 'sound' your heart makes when your dancing on the edge of a black-hole, where all the light and dirty-cloths go?

AWE...
 — AlchemiA

HAH! Thanks for all that.:)
BTW - should second line end with some punctuation?

ahed.
 — unknown

nope, you got it - perfect 'lil ironic-gem
 — unknown

ta ;)
 — unknown

lol
 — laura352

you have great hearing, laura.

ahed:)
 — unknown

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