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aries took Ra tickles
fractalcore

never
 1
forget -- full
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of resilient trees
 3
in the spring
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breeze:
 5
 
 
silent...
 6
 
 
kisses lull wishes
 7
on petal boat rides,
 8
cryptic waters filming
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clouds in a frenzy --
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thirty-twoo satellites
 11
reflect stellar light,
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collide;
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dandelions,
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      sunflowers,
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             poppies --
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a field of memories of
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eternally-juvenile bees;
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their-teenage smiles
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we'll lust for a long wile,
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will meet
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no matter what or where
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or when or how...
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eats 1978 pollens just now.
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written 4/13/2010


for Diana Jiganie, my nisetru,
bestest friend and soulmate


on her 32nd earth year
with all the love
in the multiverse

---{@


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fractalcore
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Oh! Loveliness!  --can't think of anything further to say--really enjoyed reading this, a burst of sunshine with my morning coffee--thank you!
 — sybarite

thanks, sybarite, mike & jerry.

; )
 — fractalcore

ИІ¢ę ροεm.   Yουŗ  циІquℓ §ţγĹℓ ЅНІиеѕ Ŧħŗų ΘΠ τΗΙȘ.  ĠòóÐ ŏИЄ.
 — JKWeb

makes me smile yes
 — unknown

thanks for the usual kindness, mr. JKWebster sir.
: )
 — fractalcore

i'm glad it has a positive effect on you, unky.
: )
 — fractalcore

boompfh...
: )
 — fractalcore

JKWEB what is that font you are using? i love it!
 — unknown

lovely
 — Callisto

hi, циk.

iţ'§ ȘΘ còóĹ, ŗiĠhŦ?

; )
 — fractalcore

Callisto,

thanks.
: )
 — fractalcore

boompfh.
: )
 — fractalcore

i like the drip of L17 on L18.
 — NicMichaels

great job
 — unknown

thank you, NicMichaels.
; )
 — fractalcore

thank you, too, dear unk.
; )
 — fractalcore

te iubesc asa de mult
---{@

: )
 — fractalcore

reading this is like remembering the most beautiful thing that will ever happen to me, i hope it comes to be. this is lovely. thanks for writing.
 — DeformedLion

hmm, reading this after more than 6 years is...
good, actually.

good ol' days.

:)
 — fractalcore

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