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your auburnfur, between
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your auburnfur, between
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my fingers; touch(ing) me,
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as fastly-thumping hearts
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sing a youthsong, uptempo,
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wordless, climbing, irresolute,
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harmonizingly hormonal.
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witness, testify, instruct me in
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escalation, let me slowly stumble
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upon the valley of your love,
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my playground: bells dingdong
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through your full-ent(h)rusting.
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gasp yes! grip,
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even while lips chap,
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the conversation forbiddenly goes.
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we love-danced, harken, God:
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post-moaningly idle,
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we have left heaven.
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7 May 10

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pretty [and] gneiss.
: )
 — fractalcore

pretty indeed
 — psychofemale

tedious lazy crap writing
 — unknown

Thank you, fractalcore and psychofemale. [:

Unknown, please qualify your statement.
 — ishtarboy300

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