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birthday happy burp
fractalcore

baby burp, happy
 1
girl: new day-breed,
 2
new breed of theirs --
 3
 
 
there's a full lady
 4
in bloom, after full moons
 5
countless n' still counting.
 6




written 5/19/2010

for my friend, enkantada
http://poetrycritical.net/~enkantada

on her birthday

: )

19 May 10

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Very sweet. If someone wrote this for my birthday (which, incidentally, is this Saturday), I would be very happy.
 — ishtarboy300

birthday happy burp in advance, ishtarboy300.
i'd be happy to tweak it a little for you -- in the
gender section perhaps? you share the same
birthday with my 1st gf, by the way.

thanks for dropping

bye.
; )
 — fractalcore

Of course, it's a 10!
because it's for me : )
You're one of the few men
who filled my birthday with glee

If you were here,
we'll have some beer
Despite the miles,
You make me smile


For being a true friend
My love, I send.

One day, we'll meet again...
 — enkantada

your verse is getting better, my fwend.
yes, till we meet again.

and again,

BIRTHDAY HAPPY BURP.
; )
 — fractalcore

Awh!!!
 — psychofemale

aw thanks, psychofemale.
you're too nice for your name.

; )
 — fractalcore

ishtarboy300,

birthday happy belated burp to you
in case i forgot to greet you in the
forums.

; )
 — fractalcore

birthday happy burp, my friend.

: )
 — fractalcore

happy birthday according to writer
 — unknown

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