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windows sievin' vista
fractalcore

but eye see the same hue
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poetry, or prose?
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both, you suppose?
 3
 
 
aura...
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your soup owes both?
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performance
 6
art?
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in
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tell
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actual
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faux pas...
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TE IUBESC ♥∞ .. .-.. --- ...- . -.-- --- ..-
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http://vimeo.com/7235817


one either reads for patterns that can have auditory or visual nature and effect, or, if he can, for mind, i.e. thought patterns apart from those strictly sensory, with a lot of sense of rhythm or cadence -- now there's a sharp demarkation line.

or, simply read for misspellings like 'demarkation', in this case.

i like the vimeo flick, buy duh weigh.

; )

12 Jun 10

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Love it!!!
 — psychofemale

Love 8 to 11, know a few AMD fanboys who would love it too. Not too sure about L5 though - is that a personal reference, or some tech thing I'm unaware of?

Windows 7 is <3
 — wendz

win-sievin' is price-loss
 — AlchemiA

boompfh.
; )
 — fractalcore

aura inside my window,
crystals on the pane:
half of every memory,
snow-flake cut from rain.
 — bmikebauer

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