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Bliss
cubbzor

not done

I was to ride the ghost train on a
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one-way trip to bliss.
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But missed the ride when the
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cab-driver of mine
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stopped to take a piss.
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The classifieds all advertise
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the woes of a nation.
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My empty pockets
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reveal an emptier wallet
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I guess this is just
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the state of inflation.
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4 Jul 10

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So is there any more to the story or is that it? I'm sorry, I can't take this seriously.
 — Abracadabra

how's this? still not complete though
 — cubbzor

the time it takes.. to place.. just takes..
 — unknown

what?
 — cubbzor

yeah, it needs more....
 — psychofemale

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