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cubbzor

Oh GoD
 1
Oh dAmn
 2
hEy maN
 3
quick jam?
 4
 
 
brEAk Beat
 5
NoiSe FeaT
 6
crUisinG dowN
 7
rhythm street
 8
 
 
nOd heAd
 9
baSs bEnd
 10
fuZZ is
 11
cheap trend
 12
 
 
oH shIT
 13
baRely missEd
 14
AmPli-fied
 15
tiredness
 16
 
 
cloSe Call
 17
miGhty tall
 18
Huge tRee
 19
large fall
 20

18 Jul 10

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how about, 'streeeet' for line 8? and, 'fuZZ up cheap trend'? and, too bad it's not a hip enough readership that you could write, on 16, 'tiredniisss'. it'd crunch up the stanza, so that the leanness of the last stanza would contrast like clear and true vision.

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DOA
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wow!
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