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Silence in the Church
uncjaf

my blood is rushing
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warm current
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beneath her Sunday skin
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pressing old habits
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into the
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seams of Chantilly lace.
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23 Jul 10

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any ideas?
 — uncjaf

this is really really good.
i personally love it.
:)
 — mandolyn

thanks Mandolyn!
 — uncjaf

i like it the way it is, its simple but carries so much in it
 — psychofemale

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