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I will buy the flowers myself
unknown

     ‡    thank you Ms. Woolf for the title. ‡

Would it be
 1
me to
 2
make the just desserts
 3
for a trite sniftered
 4
trilobite with a mind
 5
like cooked cabbage?
 6
 
 
A masterpiece of culinary
 7
surprises-
 8
with road kill filling
 9
hand sculpted in lead
 10
marzipan and delicately
 11
decorated with slimy
 12
entrails of glow worms
 13
 
 
to showcase
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the slats in a
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dull-bisque smile
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whilst chit-chatting about
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sea green brooches
 18
over late pantie strained
 19
tea and a quaint game
 20
of toad in the hole
 21
 
 
through cat-slit eyes
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teasing- I watch as
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the guest starts
 24
squirming with
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contractions
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alas the London clock
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swings to the ETD
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irrevocably
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upon my prediction
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abruptly lifting suave
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upholstery the guest
 32
nearly tears the door off
 33
its hinges desperate for
 34
the closest lavatory
 35
Where oh where
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haste his english
 37
manners?
 38

25 Jul 10

Rated 9 (7) by 3 users.
Active (3): 8, 10
Inactive (9): 1, 1, 1, 3, 8, 9, 10, 10, 10, 10

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Comments:

Were they for his grave?
 — unknown

HAh HA, thanks Jenka *
 — unknown

I loved the entire poem. ...... I imagined a smug/half crazy old woman in the uk doing nasty things to an old flame that suddenly showed up after 30 years....well done.
 — frogilicus

Lovely
 — unknown

Well you imagined part of it right, crazy yes surely.
Old no.
 — unknown

yea, first stanza sold me...the rest just kept time.  good visuals in oils i'd say...yes.
 — jenakajoffer

Oh just a little thang I whipped up. Thanks.;)
 — unknown

ribbet ribbet, thanks Froggy. I like frog legs. @@
 — unknown

hello Lily,

any luck with the diet and dental work?
 — unknown

why are you jealous of parrot girl?
 — unknown

Who is Parrot girl and who is Lilly person?
 — unknown

This is very cruel of you to give me 1s this writing does not deserve 1s. This may not be the best writing but I think it is not bad and certainly doesn't deserve ones.
 — unknown

Thank you unknown
 — unknown

this poem doesnt deserve ones, and even tho i dont believe in rating, i gave this  a ten.  
 — jenakajoffer

*jenkas what you needin? a sitter? ;) donka my sweet Fraulein
 — unknown

I can't see why anyone would be jealous of parrot (polly) girl
although she is quite lovely
I would like to steal her brooches
Didn;t that go down with the titanic?
 — unknown

I think I am the parrot girl to which they refer - unfortunately.

And unknown is right, no reason to be jealous of me - I am obsessive, scattered, boring, oftentimes delusional, talk too much and I am extremely messy and nasty at times.

Basically, I am not nice. Though, thankyou for saying I'm lovely, Unknown.

But you can be jealous of my sea green brooch. That makes me happy ;-)

Was part of this poem inspired by my brooch?

LOL, I don't think it was -

In which case, I have prattled on for about half an hour about myself, for no reason, and to nobody who cares. (told you I was boring).

Now lets have a looksie at your poem.

LOL, Hell hath no fury and all that....

This is a fun poem - and unique - can't say I have ever dreamed of giving somebody the runs as a form of revenge...or putting road-kill in dessert but it is certainly a novel idea and I will tuck it away for when and if I need it ;-)

I think the last stanza needs attention - because its a great finale and I don't want it be feel rushed - (no pun intended)

L33 - nearly tears the door off? - nearly tears the door 'from' is gramatically more pleasing

All in all, a fun read. 9 from me.
 — PollyReg

stop whinging imposTOR
haHaHa
now go thwack those cottageCHEESE thighs
into a semblance of shape
l'il pork chop lita
 — unknown

unknown
your doctor rang, you need to schedule your lobotomy for  tomorrow
 — unknown

I love my cottage cheese thighs. Whoever that is directed to - worry not, just make it your mantra!!!!

Cottage Cheese thighs (and real women) for the world!

(Hi again, nice poem writer)
 — PollyReg

Hello Polly. Women are beautiful and should be cherished and never made to feel bad about themselves- some men think that women want to be treated badly, such a self-fulfilling prophecy for them. I am interested in a man who can make me sing and make me soar, someone who is my sheltering sky in the storm.
Not that I can't take care of myself- I don't need a man for that. ;)
 — unknown

stop whinging imposTOR
haHaHa
now go thwack those cottageCHEESE thighs
into a semblance of shape
l'il pork chop lita
— unknown

^^^ he married his mother
 — unknown

great job, kept my interest
 — psychofemale

Wow this is funne
 — unknown

makes me smile even wryly and rated as well. what else?
 — unknown

haaaaaaaaaaaaa
 — unknown

I smell a rat .
 — unknown

Thanks for that poor rating.
 — unknown

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