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jiganie means prodiAgy
fractalcore

aye,
 1
bee calm,
 2
 
 
girl genius
 3
.
 4
hide me inside your chest --
 5
the frailty of a request
 6
less frail than your alluring silence
 7
.
 8
 
 
donut ever flee,
 9
gone haywire incredulous;
 10
just know, love,
 11
must nut[s] o'erdo-o'erdue --
 12
 
 
promises qui[e]te
 13
remembered sooo tactfully,
 14
unabashedly virileeeven
 15
when (x,y)=zzzZZZzzz...
 16
 
 
 
 
∴ te iubesc asa de mult ♥∞ .. .-.. --- ...- . -.-- --- ..-
 17
---{☯
 18




for the sexiest mind i've ever known:
Diana Jiganie,

whose poem, GIRL GENIUS,
which she posted on her 30th earth year
[april 13, 2008] elsewhere, appears
in ||3-8.


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9 Aug 10

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i love you nisetru

♥∞
 — unknown

i like the two 'frail's -- they make a little whirlpool in the stream.
 — bmikebauer

hmm, unky...

; )
 — fractalcore

hi, mikee.

yes, i like that part of her poem a lot.
hope i didn't ruin it with my intrusive lines.
i'm not sure if i made a good counterpoint of sorts
to what she wrote.

: )
 — fractalcore

boompfh...
: )
 — fractalcore

more sweet ones, please...
; )
 — fractalcore

boompfh.
: )
 — fractalcore

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