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In October
softyetharsh

It's this pain
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Awakens the numbness
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It's this silence
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Rouses the innermost
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In vain so it flows
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In thine heart so it's kept
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Thus awaits when in sadness
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Triggers when it rains in summer
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Here comes another storm in September
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Goes as if never to return
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Just like holding on for too long
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Eventually to free a soul.
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13 Aug 10

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so nice.

thanks for sharing and happy
friday the 13th.

; )
 — fractalcore

i'm reading it without the 'in summer'
and 'in september', and hmm... i like it.

are those phrases significant to you?
: )
 — fractalcore

aye, who am i to say?!
 — manuka

It's an honor to be led and introduced to this site..

Fractalcore, thank you too for minding my post. Will think over those lines..

Hi manuka..tnx..;)
 — softyetharsh

ah lovely
 — unknown

There comes oktober, i loved it all
 — Hulda

i like seeing oktober as you spelled it..danke..
 — softyetharsh

Seasonal poems are great, maybe people write off October too readily, its still Autumnal with colours galore
 — Koffee

Bump this Oct poom ;)
 — jenn

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