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Inuki

i severed you—like an arm, a leg,
 1
tearing sinewy flesh and skin
 2
breaking bones like rock salt
 3
cracking from a shot gun,
 4
and echoing into neon night.
 5
 
 
i bled you out—
 6
a pustulating canker sore,
 7
a festering blister on my heel,
 8
a viral infection
 9
eating away at my innards.
 10
 
 
your shit-stained prayers
 11
pleased the sky,
 12
but still i
 13
readied the glinting blade
 14
and slit my stomach open,
 15
seppuku spewing guts
 16
upon the ground.
 17
 
 
aching intestines wreathed out
 18
an uncoiling and enchanted snake,
 19
spraying horrified onlookers
 20
with warm, wet blood.
 21
 
 
my elongated nails
 22
slipped through the sky
 23
piercing my eyes
 24
and plucking them out.
 25
 
 
i clawed at my face
 26
with calloused hands,
 27
shredding skin and cartilage
 28
into anonymity.
 29
 
 
i yanked fistfuls of hair
 30
from my scalp,
 31
casting them aside.
 32
it took hours, but
 33
my oedipal screaming
 34
soon wrenched my throat
 35
into choked spasms and sobs.
 36
 
 
i vomited turnips
 37
upon the tarmac,
 38
and wretched
 39
your baked spaghetti.
 40
 
 
stumbling blindly
 41
i tore out my trachea,
 42
pistoning inky black bile
 43
that reeked of greek coffee.
 44
 
 
i burst at every end
 45
like a children's water park—
 46
a corrosive plaything,
 47
toxic ooze ushering forth;
 48
your scorpion sting
 49
sticking me like a thousand needles.
 50
 
 
 
 
on the greyhound
 51
a girl
 52
placed a princess bandaid
 53
across my exposed and aching bone
 54
 
 
that won't make it better
 55
i said,
 56
she pointed to her watch.
 57

20 Aug 10

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she should have given you some advil too-- maybe an ice cream sandwich.
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Intriguing write.  My favorite lines are 41-44.  I also like end lines 55-57 as 'time heals all wounds'.  Nicely executed.
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