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Puddle Fish
tristesse

*Puddle Cat, Puddle Duck*
 1
Skin: tawny (but tasty)
 2
    For five ghosts to greet,
 3
    and my cold hands to eat.
 4
Wings: tricky (and hasty)
 5
    Of fluttered hearts born,
 6
    grown wary and worn.
 7
 
 
*Puddle Fish, Puddle Mouse*
 8
Fins: muddy blues
 9
    (with thistle-tarp hues).
 10
Eyes: earthy teals
 11
    (with black-border heels).
 12
Leading stallions
 13
    to up-dance like silly,
 14
Glancing nannies
 15
    to one touch-eyed billy.
 16
 
 
*Puddle Owl, Puddle Fox*
 17
Tail: a burly silver
 18
    (with candy-colored liver).
 19
Brow: slate and grey
 20
    (a subtle depthless display).
 21
A pen to craft and a sword to clasp
 22
    (Your own cobble-pan broom
 23
    to sweep dust-webs and gloom)
 24
With your sway-softened grasp.
 25
My, my--
 26
Mind: wormless and tussle-free
 27
    (mindful: I think we can all agree)
 28
 
 
*Puddle Swan, Puddle Hen*
 29
Your bird-sitting flight,
 30
    flitting bird-hair light--
 31
Your nightstand sprint
 32
    don't disturb,
 33
Your jackknife dive:
 34
    oh, suberb!
 35
 
 
*Cuddle,*
 36
    don't piddle time away,
 37
*Puddle,*
 38
    don't trammel what I say
 39
With any mislaid rage,
 40
    in a scruff-clenched cage.
 41
Puddle, use your white-holed ears.
 42
Cuddle between bitter-blond fears.
 43
 
 
*Puddle Soup, Puddle Pill,
 44
Puddle Spill, Puddle Swill*
 45
Mouth for a moth to kiss--
 46
    and kiss, and kiss, and kiss!
 47
broth for a mouth to miss--
 48
    and miss, and miss, and miss.
 49

21 Aug 10


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gimmicky, whimsical, and amazing! LOVE THIS!
 — Sequiturist

weird weird
 — psychofemale

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