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Dinner At Amy Ruth's
Sequiturist

In the hunger of a layover storm on the cliff of March,
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I had dinner at Amy Ruth’s up in Harlem on West 116th Street
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to celebrate a poet going to college in Mass.,
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Every entrée on the sticky tri-fold menu
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was named after a famous African American,
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and everyone got theirs barbequed, smothered, or baked in fat.
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Dipping my fried okra lumps in a chunky white sauce
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I thought of the whine culture
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of America—  good samaritanism enforceable by laws
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(because altruism is for cowards).
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Uncle Sam, that old bastard who has been around
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since America went after Canadian land in 1812
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forever pointing at you, me, everyone besides himself.
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My friends, mood lightened by sticky corn bread on their lips,
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laughed at the dish called baked Barack Obama—
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deep fried chicken drowned in honey.
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(Blame the President for your acid reflex
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or sour stomache!)
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I’d imagine that people come here to unload,
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be faultless for once;
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tell the waitress the Reverend Al Sharpton tastes bland,
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and Al Roker is overcooked, hard on the mouth.
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To come heavy
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and leave light onto broken bottle sidewalks,
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towards rain shower traffics on the Malcolm X Boulevard—
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that was my black experience.
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30 Aug 10

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pretty good, makes me hungry..
 — manuka

amazing last stanza.

love all the detail of the food and all the food metaphors

would you consider dropping lots of the commas of the last stanza?
 — JaneyJane

^ noted, and thanks. :)
 — Sequiturist

I love the analogy, haha.
 — unknown

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