poetry critical

online poetry workshop



Of Runes
softyetharsh

Hail! To the runes of the world
 1
You wake this Trojan soul from sleep
 2
Unmask in me thou truest lies
 3
Save thee each time I trip and further.
 4
In a looking glass I see you move
 5
You followed the moon ‘til dawn
 6
I once thrashed them upon my back
 7
Relentlessly pulls to endless turns.
 8
 
 
Now gone are days of wrinkled laces
 9
All lay the aces and knaves
 10
Believe a gypsy tells all
 11
Kismet crosses over distant shores.
 12


July 2007

2 Sep 10

Rated 10 (10) by 1 users.
Active (1): 10
Inactive (3): 10, 10, 10

(define the words in this poem)
(92 more poems by this author)

(1 user considers this poem a favorite)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

Very nice poem
 — hue

super nice
 — manuka

tnx for my polite critics ;)
 — softyetharsh

think "i see' could be omitted from L5, but i will come back and read this again, i thought it was very nice, up my alley sort of thing.

'its' without apostrophe could also work in L6, which is interesting and clever, neater as well.

i know a boy named Rune.

nice poem
 — Estella

: )
 — fractalcore

from the chest
 — softyetharsh

0.237s