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fractalcore

'fore
 1
mmm'eye'icks
 2
dot furl
 3
whose end
 4
ends a planck...
 5
 
 
wait,
 6
four the s'words
 7
that prod me,
 8
end duh see --
 9
 
 
knee's black
 10
as you hurry, harry.
 11




written 9/8/10 here:
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/65120/


for mandolyn, bmikebauer & jharrison.


thanks, guys.

: )

8 Sep 10

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i think i like the ending, hahaha.

and how 'ends' cannot be stretched
into a 2-syllable critter.

word to the sonic boom

shakala.

: P
 — fractalcore

i'm bravo'd up, extassary in extra perception and plasticol. sometimes, i've dreamt this very thing -- a balloon falling into my nose -- and, i'm inspired to write it all back into college english 101. -- the horror.
 — bmikebauer

LOL, this is the greatest.
how about this poem and my poem be BFF's.
:)
 — mandolyn

ho-roar, mikey.
ho-ho-roll over.

; )
 — fractalcore

except I would omit 'harry' and add 'barry'

hee hee.
 — mandolyn

"i'm bravo'd up, extassary in extra perception and plasticol."

You really do write some utter bs Mike :)

Your lips must be sore with all the ass kissing you do ;)
 — jharrison

b*tch's-lap flustered foe'em's?

i like that.

flunk planck.

: )
 — fractalcore

it was a joke, lady harry. this sucks as poetry but it's good fun as fun words among friends and pets.
 — bmikebauer

yeahs, doo dot ting eww doo, harry.

wiggle-wriggle eat, yo.
; )
 — fractalcore

so it's ok for frac to joke but not me?

what gives!?!?

hey frac, you wanna get nisetru and go base jumping?
i'm first.
 — mandolyn

now why don't you guys -- i mean 'guys only', barry's mandy -- get
a cozy room and watch a pirated triple x-rated flick, hmm?

you can blow your helium ball loonies inn dare.
watchathink?


this peace wrecks mmm'eye whirled, buy duh weigh.

so, fekk off, mike.
'everything is a rose petal farted from my arse widely-parted.'

*blink-wink*

; )
 — fractalcore

lol

eww squared.
 — mandolyn

haha, Fract this is cute...just look at that last line :)

i'm bit jealous i don't have any pirate in me for this beard gang...
 — Estella

uhm, she's lately been busy outdoors or in the mountains or
shooting photos and stuff, while i've been stuck here at home
watching all the shit going on here, hehe.

dunno if she and i could handle that new experience, but i could
use a good adrenalin rush for sure.

we could do it dan osman style and die, hehehe.

oops, bad image.
sorry.

; )
 — fractalcore

aw, estella, ye can scupper up some "arr matey" lingo, avast ye can become a drivelswigger!
 — mandolyn

lol frac-- yeah, perhaps we should go with plan B and wait until she returns.
(but to be honest, i'll probably chicken out and say "yeah, i gotta go..")

;)

She shoots photos? And in the mountains to boot! She is one lucky lass.
 — mandolyn

hell low, Est[r]ella.

aren't you a fallen/falling starr, er star?
no 'pirates' were included in the making
of this jaw-knee deep flick, so i don't
wanna hear anything about bart simpson
mentioned here, hehe.

thanks for stopping

bye.
; )
 — fractalcore

hoowhat in low hell am i talking about?
lemme repeat that [ehem]:

hell low, Est[r]ella.

aren't you a fallen/falling starr, er star?
no 'pirates' were included in the making
of this jaw-knee deep flick, so i don't
wanna hear anything about bart simpson
here, hehe.

thanks for stopping

bye.
; )
 — fractalcore

well, i'm the luckiest guy on earth because
i found her in this lifetime.

now don't make me cry; stick to your pirate[d]
thoughts, hehehe.

: )
 — fractalcore

Great poem!!!
 — psychofemale

hi, psychofemale.

are you sure about that? mike says this sucks,
which i thinks is true... but which i also think
is untrue.

please think again, hehe.

: )
 — fractalcore

i summon the 3 x's.
eat some salmon like
3 kutee kittees shooed.

use a keen opener.
; )
 — fractalcore

aww, that is sweet you and nisetru are in ♥
i am so very very happy for the both of ye landlubbers.
:)
 — mandolyn

"well, i'm the luckiest guy on earth because
i found her in this lifetime."

even though i am not a man i am relating to that statement

happy for you, i am.
=-)
 — Estella

thank you, mandee.

thank you, Estella.

i wonder where harry is.
i miss her brand of trollism, haha.

: )
 — fractalcore

yoohoo, hooree...

; )
 — fractalcore

Freakest of freakin Heck YEAHS!
 — unknown

freakin fhank fou, frunkster.

; )
 — fractalcore

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