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My Adrenaline Rush
softyetharsh

More than a hideaway
 1
This is my secret garden
 2
 
 
Seeding on eccentricity
 3
Flowering memoirs
 4
Of the wild and evergreen
 5
Ever fruitful at standstill
 6
Water keeps its soul a-flowing
 7
In bliss though forever wanting
 8
I yield its solitude
 9

02 January 2007
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: )
 — fractalcore

hmm
 — unknown

hey unk, what does 'hmm' mean? ...tnx for the smiley fractalcore!
 — softyetharsh

this poem seems to be wanting the word 'crush' in there somewhere
or it is just me :)

'for like a hundred years'  that made me giggle-spurt
 — Estella

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