poetry critical

online poetry workshop



575
fractalcore

5-7-5 is
 1
a number; take 1 and w8
 2
4 your turn, hehe.
 3




very gneiss 5-7-5 plague lately


written 9/28/10
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/65478/

thanks, lalita.

      ____
     __/__
       /\
     /   \
fractalcore
     : )

28 Sep 10

Rated 10 (10) by 1 users.
Active (1):
Inactive (0): 10

(define the words in this poem)
(204 more poems by this author)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

uh, that's '8' in there that middle part, and maybe this is an in-joke... can't pronounce it down to get your meaning... maybe, 'take and weight'...?
 — bmikebauer

well, it should follow the 5-7-5 syllable count, mike.
do you think i shouldn't have spelled out the numbers
there, and wrote it this way instead:

5-7-5 is
a number; take 1 and w8
4 your turn, hehe.

: )
 — fractalcore

boompfh.
; )
 — fractalcore

excellent. weight and see how fast this one rises to the top ten, then call me in the morning... and, watch out for spelling-vultures... make shur you're dead before they eat you.
 — bmikebauer

:)
 — RGJohnson

would they fancy a trying-hard vegetarian, mike?

thanks for the smiley, RGJohnson.

; )
 — fractalcore

well bite my back and call me an apple!
 — mandolyn

love it ;)
 — lalita

hey there, rubber apple mandee.
you taste like rubber apple mandee.

; )
 — fractalcore

thank you for your poetry, lalita.

; )
 — fractalcore

0.225s