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The moon is in Orbit
fried2noodle

around my cock
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around a sock
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the sock that has aroused my
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cock
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it is lime colored and drilly,
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not a fonder part silly,
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but will he? oh, so, says
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mr. Willy,
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did-dee?
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my smarts are like thumbs
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point thought with me
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drummed a love
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up
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so smelly,
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shower my hope
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wilts
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flowers in soap
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mind is
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a moap,
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i have a moon
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on me moan,
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it shines like a throne
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and has nectarine
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tex-tures
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and my moon isn't new
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but
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i'd sure like to
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share it with you.
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29 Sep 10

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: )
 — fractalcore

you and the moon.  :)
 — Estella

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