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Devoid of Life
bear

Lysol, Fabreeze, Axe;
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I have come to hate
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all of these artificial
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aromas that have formed
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into being to cover
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those fowl smells
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of daily life.
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They have taken
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the odors of dirt
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and grime to be replaced
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by the stink of chemicals.
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Life is supposed to be filthy
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with mud and crud on your face;
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the sanitary world will kill us.
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Only thing worse than these
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synthetic scnets are
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fake flowers.
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29 Sep 10

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I agree. An unusual subject that needs to be aired more if thats the right word. Good job
 — larrylark

amen brother bear, amen.

:)
 — mandolyn

cheers
 — bear

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