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Always a step ahead
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There is nothing you could say or do
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to make me love you any less,
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so go ahead, eat the last klondike bar
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and tell me to 'stick it' --
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I'm looking forward to hearing you say
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"this tastes funny"
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11 Oct 10

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Stick it. This tastes funny.
 — unknown

Thank you.
Glad you took a bite.
 — mandolyn

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-Mandee
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hahaha
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lol
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Amusing.

Good twist at the end.

tp
 — texaspoet

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