|Winter & Exodus
All wrapped up in down
mummified for winter's walk
gently forms a white blanket
awaits angel wings
17 Oct 10
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i am beginning to like your unique style.
two literal haiku.
too many syllables. Japanese cadence is totally different.
four is the new ten.
@Raskolniikov ~ checked your website, your photos are thought provoking and distinctive.
@ unknown, yes, I agree with perhaps too literal for a Haiku. Did not realize that 5-7-5 are too many syllables. Will research your statements. Thanks.
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