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blueprint:
fractalcore

imagine this
 1
writt'n on the barrel
 2
of a cyborg's rifle --
 3
 
 
short laser spurts
 4
from the nozzle,
 5
as glints of the sōl...
 6
 
 
lady love, lady
 7
bug: Rawrchitecture
 8
of the lady lover
 9
pulling the trigger.
 10
 
 
 
 
"do you love my gloves?", asks our parrot owl.
 11
 
 
 
 
[ press ctrl + F to search for the phrase,
 12
'fuck off' ]
 13




written 10/7/10
for jharrison and her Soft
Machinima


i kinda miss Mongrol, don't you?

; )




p.s.

i'm not sure if jharrison really drew this, but i don't really care. i like it and it comes really, really close to the image of a fembot she reminds me of:

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2969/morrigan1i.jpg

for a comprehensive idea of her 'art', please refer to this link:

http://www.poetrycritical.net/forum/read/245951/

19 Oct 10

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quantoom boompfh.

; )
– fractalcore

so, what do you think, jenni 'james' harrison 'ford'?
; )
– causeimbored

it's a rubbish clone spoken with a nazi tongue :)
– jharrison

it's insulting that such utter crap should be dedicated to anyone.
– jharrison

i thought it was naturist writing to write in a way which reflects your topic. good job.
– bmikebauer

"i thought it was naturist writing to write in a way which reflects your topic. good job.
— bmikebauer"


What a liar you are :)
You even lie in your sleep,
– jharrison

slight edit inane, er in nine, er line 11.
i bet birds will like it.

; )
– fractalcore

J Harrison is a man.
– unknown

no
she's
a dude-
tte

; )
– fractalcore

Yes, a dude with balls, big enough to take on...The Indomitable...The magnificent...Our Master, King and God (in that order)...Lord Mike Bauer. (you might have heard of him through the grape whine).

Signed Mary
– unknown

dudette, dued.
a dudette
with balls?

yeah, i hear harry whine
a lot when mike's around.

she might've stomped on
too many a sour grape.

; )
– fractalcore

Theres' a picture of mike bauer floating around, you'd be surprised.
– unknown

i think mike's got the wingspan required for flight,
while harry's got heavy balls which deter any
possibility of lift.

castration is the key for whiners like [s]he.
; )
– fractalcore

id rather be a whiner than an ass licker like you, fract :)
– jharrison

J Harrison is more of a man than the author of this crap :)
– jharrison

quantoom yawn
kittie on the lawn

be-9 lives
be 9 1's

; )
– fractalcore

ho-hum...
; )
– fractalcore

how far is it possible to go when dealing with someone really and absolutely vulgar, who thinks she's absolutely sort of kinky... before you turn vulgar? not far enough, i'd say, since anyone who was with you in seeing the bag lady dancing and wants to play her a tune would already know le sacre du printemps.

but, when it's obvious that the bag-lady doesn't get your jokes, it becomes tacky... like you were making fun of her. and, that's really the last thing any honest writer would want to do in a poetry forum... yes? especially to someone who smells bad.
– bmikebauer

ditto.

; )
– fractalcore

lol Mike calling someone else vulgar. theres a hoot!

you really do get that tongue of yours in deep, eh fract :)
– jharrison

quantoom yawn...
; )
– fractalcore

the yawn's against tomorrow.
– bmikebauer
 — fractalcore

Mike is the past, fractal. Always was.
 — jharrison

BLAH BLAH BLAH Y'ALL NEED A FRYING PAN TO THE SIDE OF THE HEAD...THE WHOLE LOT OF YA!!!
 — unknown

Ahh this is a sweet memorial to jh.
 — unknown

first unk,

blah-blah-blooh-blooh...
; )
 — fractalcore

2nd unk,

'memorial' sounds very much like 'epitaph', hahaha.
; )
 — fractalcore

ey harry,

you're here? sorry, i didn't notice you
get in the room.

thanks for stopping

bye.
; )
 — fractalcore

'memorial' sounds very much like 'epitaph', hahaha.
; )
— fractalcore  

ii
 — unknown

quantoom boompfh...
; )
 — fractalcore

: P
 — fractalcore

*poof*

; )
 — fractalcore

puff duh magic dragon
down buy duh tree, hehe.

; )
 — fractalcore

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