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Set Me Free
vuduprincess

I sit by the window consumed with frustration,
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   in this chaotic world will I ever find patience?
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So much negativity in this cruel world,
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   I wonder, how much more I can endure?
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Why do I keep trying to place the blame,
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   maybe because I'm overwhelmed with shame?
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Starting to feel calmed by the rain,
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    watching it fall against the window pane.
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Cleansing the Earth, I wish it could cleanse me.
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   Cleanse me from a past that refuses to let me be.
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Why do I sit here and let myself bleed?
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   Rain fall on me, lick my wounds and set me free!
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25 Oct 10

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We see ourselves as we see the world.
 — unknown

Water cleans, good to use, bleeding, licking your wound, you surely wish to be free and I am sure you will! For me, I like such rhyming, this is similar what I have written about being free but yours is better! I like the rain and the Earth you use to explain, thanks.
 — Hulda

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