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Sand-tunes
lalita

Strolling on sand-tunes
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with my walkie-talkie mind
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sand-skrits between toes
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28 Oct 10

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    decent Haiku-Goeszon
 — goeszon

I'm beached
 — larrylark

i think i miss reading you.
been awhile.

this works well for the images.
; )
 — fractalcore

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