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fractalcore

dead
 1
mmm'eyes,
 2
pay-per sss'liced,
 3
seedy's shred
 4
dead --
 5
 
 
bean dare,
 6
donDUHtetto,
 7
 
 
10
 8
sssOUR
 9
IN-NERd
 10
grrrAPEs'
 11
 
 
mong[r]ælled
 12
numb3rs --
 13
 
 
 
 
 
 
yours trolly,
 14
 
 
charles
 15
apes -- oops -- eppes
 16
darn-win
 17
 
 
 
 
 
 
PC, er PS:
 18
1-end only
 19
cha-grin.
 20
 
 
 
 
peepy sea, err
 21
peepy yes:
 22
 
 
high tutu larry flyingheart qulark
 23
off duh z = zz + see
 24
blackhole's arck...
 25
 
 
 
 
^ditto.
 26
 
 
 
 
; )
 27




aka 'be[i]n-waaah: poem outside of PC'


written 31 Oct 10 3:24AM
http://www.poetrycritical.net/forum/read/246250/


for Diana Jiganie


you will always be my poem

---{@



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fractalcore
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in memoriam:

kurt cobain, jimi hendrix, janis joplin,
blackholes, 'Mongrol (for Mongrol)', Benoit Mandelbrot,
albert einstein, boo-duh bro[ugh]t to sleep,
13, et cetera, et al end all.

...namaskar...


31 Oct 10

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nice dedication
 — unknown

tanks, unk.

how 'bout duh 27 lines damnselves?
; )
 — fractalcore

havent read. i always like dedications. it's a 10
 — unknown

are you writing with invisible ink?
aye squint reed eew.

butt, eye sea duh 10.

8 more 1's twoo go.
; )
 — fractalcore

dedication's altered a wee bit
like mutable cloned wabbits.

; )
 — fractalcore

still liked the original ;)

ten tanks
 — unknown

wish i get more of what's this for dumbsters like me?
 — unknown

ey, unk.

ten tanks sound scary,
butt tanks.

; )
 — fractalcore

2nd unk,

you remind me of my friend in cyprus
who dumpster-dives for veggies.

one of the coolest artists i've known.
; )
 — fractalcore

quantoom boompfh...
; )
 — fractalcore

quantoom boompfh
for the fractal hologram...

; )
 — fractalcore

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