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Betrayed
lalita

Premature scarring
 1
recording songs of sorrow
 2
betrayed innocence
 3

For the last few months I've been servicing emotionally disturbed/abused teens who live in a sheltered home. I've been recording their songs, some of which they composed and others not, and plan to make them individual CD's. It's been challenging, sometimes I feel I can reach them and see them light up, and other times not. Kind of like light bulbs going through intermittent power surges.

7 Nov 10

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wish i worked that job with you.
 — unknown

The poetry is in your comment. Write THAT! There is so much emotion there, go with it!
 — notamy

To unk, I've been muddling through, trying to discover ways to have their minds and bodies engaged in as positive experience as possbile.
Notamy, I think I have a mind block about what is poetry and not. I've been wanting to just express my thoughts as I did in the above footnote, but have reservations posting it as 'poetry'.
Thanks for your encouragement.
 — lalita

poetry is whatever you want it to be.
 — unknown

gneiss.

lemme humor you with 'underabulb':
http://www.poet rycritical.net/read/55178/

it's good, yes?

; )
 — fractalcore

oops, please fix that gap in the url and it will work.
; )
 — fractalcore

Fractal, just checked out 'under the bulb'.... what a fun and interesting perception. Thanks. Plus I enjoyed your own 'bonus' poetry that you added there ;) Jackpot for me. ;)
 — lalita

well, that author just kicks ass, doesn't he?
one of my PC heroes of poetry, actually.

; )
 — fractalcore

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