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Leaving Valentino's
Sequiturist

For the first time in almost four years,
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I walked into Valentino’s Supermarket,
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to the marble tile where a jar of bayleaf once shattered
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by the bulging stacks of Nutella, lining the produce aisle.
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Overhead, copper pipes spray mist on the apricots and nectarines,
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mixed together by old eastern European grandmothers,
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whose sunken lips and swollen cheekbones
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remind me of midwives in 20th century films of feudal England,
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feeling the fruits’ ripeness with their fingers because they are nearsighted
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from nights of staring out the windows of their high-rise apartments,
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longing to catch a glimpse of their motherland’s
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pastures of rye, only days from harvest.
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A plump Polish teenager behind the cashier counter
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stretches her profane tongue as the line of waiting baskets
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grows longer— it is six in the afternoon, and fathers with sawdust
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and worn pliers in their asphalt hands
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are coming home from construction sites
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in the developmental areas of Glendale and Maspeth,
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and mothers have retired from the soap opera marathon
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on Channel 2 and the phonetics homeworks of their toddlers.
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Beside a tray of homemade caramel toffees,
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paint chips on the Grecian jar of biscottis is peeling away,
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the almond crumbs sticky and collected on the bottom,
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where they've been since the summer of a broken bayleaf jar.
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10 Nov 10

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    There is nothing like an education...
 — gblade

Well constructed and thoughful observation of K-mart transience Mitch :-)
 — pdemitchell

gblade, what do you mean by that?
 — Sequiturist

I really like the last 2 lines...
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